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Blue Ocean II

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'I think if i were to describe him,
he'd be the one to drag me out to the
beach, step on seashells, drown me in
the sea and feed me to the seagulls all
with a white sharkteeth smile on his face'
I'm so strange, but I kinda like these.. I suppose
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RussianTim's avatar
I really like this and the first one too. The only thing I would change is how often you say sea in this short piece. Maybe try "Step on seashells, drown me in the ocean, and feed me to the 'gulls." But its still a good piece!