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i keep dreaming
about a boy
with dark circles
around his eyes

smoking cigarettes
at 3 in the morning
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This sounds like the opening to a longer monologue or a song.. could you write more?
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OmnomnomSquirl Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
it does. i will when i know how the story continues
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If not, you know I'd probably be able to write it for you.  :)
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OmnomnomSquirl Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i have a feeling you're going to anyway :p
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Time is fleeting for me right now...and I'd much rather see your writing evolve on it's own...
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OmnomnomSquirl Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i see. you'll have to wait then:)
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*feels inspired, goes and buys her two yellow roses and leaves them on her doorstep**
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OmnomnomSquirl Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
awww thats so cute
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ijxijx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
smoking is bad m'kay
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OmnomnomSquirl Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
we know babe
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